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As I looked in your eyes
As I fell more and more deeply in love
As I firstly understood what a crush is
You're my first crush
As I touched your hand
As I felt so safe between your arms
As you wiped away my tears
You're my first love
As you started hating me
As you started ignoring me
As you started hurting me
You're my first heart breaker
As you let go my hand
As you left me behind
As you stole my soul
As you walked away
You're my first and last love….
As I fell more and more deeply in love
As I firstly understood what a crush is
You're my first crush
As I touched your hand
As I felt so safe between your arms
As you wiped away my tears
You're my first love
As you started hating me
As you started ignoring me
As you started hurting me
You're my first heart breaker
As you let go my hand
As you left me behind
As you stole my soul
As you walked away
You're my first and last love….
Literature
Never forget
It occurred suddenly
Right before my eyes
You simply withered away
From this earth, gone.
Abundant tears fall
Down my baffled eyes
For I lacked the very time
To wish you a proper goodbye.
You were special to me
A grandmother yet so much more
Someone I looked up to
Someone I truly cared about.
I know you're probably
In a much better place now
Your suffering ended abruptly
And left us selfishly wanting you back.
I will never forget
These moments we shared together
I will never forget
Your memory will last forever.
I will never forget
For you were part of me
I will never forget
You still mean the world to me.
In my
Literature
Discern
I can take
a hint without
taking offense,
without affecting
my sense of self,
but it's so hard
to tell who is real.
-Brian Shuffett
July 24th, 2010
Literature
I Love You
There are three simple words
That have the power to leave me
Shaking.
Those words can produce beauty,
Deception, war, or more.
They can overturn cars
Slice open wrists
Saw through secrets.
The can shatter hearts, like
Crystal vases thrown against walls.
And yet,
They lead you to dream of a smiling future
Rich with technicolor.
They tear off clothes and explore
Every curve
Every inch of skin
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thankss foor readiing xD
what you think i should add to this?? did it describe the feeling pretty well??
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what you think i should add to this?? did it describe the feeling pretty well??
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I'm not sure about adding anything. Maybe it needs a change; the word 'as' doesn't seem to work very well in here, because you switch so abruptly from the past tense to the present, the word 'as' it makes the poem seem kind of clumsy, to me.
Sorry if I'm not being very clear. Not exactly the best explainer in the world.
Sorry if I'm not being very clear. Not exactly the best explainer in the world.